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雅思写作:增加句型多样性

2015-08-13

来源:环球教育整理

小编:cherry 126
摘要:句子结构是雅思写作评分标准“语法的多样性与准确度”中一项十分重要的考量因素,我们需要在雅思写作中增加句型的多样性。本文环球教育小编从句子的一致、连贯等几方面进行分析讲解。

       句子结构是雅思写作评分标准“语法的多样性与准确度”中一项十分重要的考量因素,我们需要在雅思写作中增加句型的多样性。本文环球教育小编从句子的一致、连贯等几方面进行分析讲解。

  1. 一致:如句内的逻辑关系,注意检查是否存在简单推论、逻辑残缺、逻辑悖论、依赖偏见等。

  Born in a small town in South Chinain the early 1950s, he grew up to be a famous musician。 → He was born in a small town in South China in the early 1950s. In his childhood he liked to sing songs. Later he entered a conservatory. In the 1970s he became a famous musician。

  2. 连贯:这个问题在平行结构、共用主语、使用指代的情况下尤其需要注意。

  We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman。

  → We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable。

  Or: We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman。

  He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious。

  → He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly injured。

  Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach。

  → Looking out of the window, we can see the grassland stretching as far as the eye can reach。

  Or: Outside the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach。

  He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed。

  → He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting。

  Or: He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed。

  3. 简洁:英美文化推崇坦率和直接,通常不需要体现咱儒家文化的含蓄和委婉。

  It was small in size and blue in colour。

  → It was small and blue。

  He usually likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in France。

  → He prefers French wines。

  4. 强调:正如每篇文章都要有中心思想(main idea),每个段落都要有主题句(topic sentence)一般,每个句子都要围绕一个中心观点清晰地呈现出作者想要表现的重点。

  He is modest and hardworking and is a good student。

  → He is a good student, modest and hardworking。

  There is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old, in the temple。

  → In the temple there is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old。

  At the sight of the disorderly crowd, he was aware that something bad would be possible。

  → The moment he saw the disorderly crowd, he knew that something bad would happen。

   在此,环球教育小编还是要提醒大家,所谓增加雅思写作句子的多样性,一定是要在确保句子准确性的基础上再去追求,不能还不会走路就想要去跑步了。

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