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雅思写作小作文范文之饼状图

2016-04-28

来源:环球教育

小编:环球教育 429
摘要:

  今天我们主要讲解下雅思写作小作文范文之饼状图类题目怎么写。我们先来看看题目。

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“雅思小作文范文”


  Q1:What is the best way to organize your answer?(你会怎么回答这个问题,怎么组织你的答案?)

  A1:Write about the pie charts together, comparing each of the reasons. ( 把这两个饼图结合在一起写,然后再比较每个的原因)

  A2:Write one paragraph about immigration and one about emigration.(写一段immigration 写一段emigration)

  The Best:A1,因为此篇文章的目的就是对比信息,所以两个图结合在一起写就是会对于不同点和相似点一目了然。

  Q2:What tense should you use to write about the IELTS pie chart?(写作的时候,用什么时态?)

  A1:Past

  A2:Present

  The best: A1 过去时,因为图中的数据都是2007年的。

  Q3:Can you talk about ‘increases’ and ‘decreases’ when describing the information?(这篇文章需要对所给的信息写一些数据增长或下降的描述吗?)

  A1:Yes

  A2: No

  The best: A2, 我们不需要写变化,因为这里就是2007年移民的问题,移进移出,对比就好了。

  接下来,我们看一下这个雅思写作小作文范文

  The pie charts illustrate the primary reasons that people came to and left the UK in 2007. At first glance it is clear that the main factor influencing this decision was employment.

  Having a definite job accounted for 30 per cent of immigration to the UK, and this figure was very similar for emigration, at 29%. A large number of people, 22%, also emigrated because they were looking for a job, though the proportion of people entering the UK for this purpose was noticeably lower at less than a fifth.

  Another major factor influencing a move to the UK was for formal study, with over a quarter of people immigrating for this reason. However, interestingly, only a small minority, 4%, left for this.

  The proportions of those moving to join a family member were quite similar for immigration and emigration, at 15% and 13% respectively. Although a significant number of people (32%) gave ‘other’ reasons or did not give a reason why they emigrated, this accounted for only 17% with regards to immigration.

  根据上面这篇雅思写作小作文范文,总结写作关键:

  一、选取关键点,着重写

  我们可以看到小作文范文中,作者主要描写的是definite job, looking for work, and formal study。其他的例如“other”,一笔带过就可以。

  二、语言客观,方便轻松阅读

  当我们在写雅思小作文饼图的时候,比较地道的方式就是,比较文中所给的信息,针对相似点和不同点去描写。根据数据,客观描写。

  三、丰富写作语言

  对于一些比重和比例的句子或者词组,一定要丰富,摒弃你们的屌丝词组。接下来,就总结给大家一些百分比的描写方式。

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“雅思写作小作文范文”style="float:none;"


  灵活的掌握词汇的写法,根据不同的题型感受考点到底是什么,侧重点是什么,把握好细节规律,写好雅思写作小作文就很容易啦!

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