来源:环球教研组
小编: 30作文的首段通常由以下几方面组成:
1) 场景或背景信息,即题目中出现的 phenomenon。
2) 一些人的观点(some people’s opinion),这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要,
考生可按照自己的情况来安排。
3) 个人观点,这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要。
大作文要求字数至少达到 250 字,在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排,第一段最好写 3-
5 句话,大约 40 字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完。
大作文开首方式通常有以下两种情况:
1) 题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有时也出现一些人的观点,并且题目中字
数较多。这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达
(paraphrase),可以做:
● 主动语态<=>被动语态
● 主谓宾<=>主系表
● 某些近义词互换
Example:
At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people
claimthat college teachers should give priority to practical courses like
computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and
geography. To what extent do you agree?
→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial
proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their
graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe
that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science