面对托福写作，很多考生抓耳挠腮。事实上，对已经有了一定英语基础的考生来说，只要配合相应技巧方法，写作文并没那么难。

　　本文带你走进英语世界，一起来看如何写出地道的托福英语作文。

　　句子：

　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　以上是考生常用的中国式英语和修改后的地道英语对比，你可以从中吸取经验，避免中式英语的犯错。