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托福写作中常见病句修改

2015-03-25

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摘要:托福写作中常见病句修改。托福写作中经常出现病句,根据中国考生的习惯本篇文章为大家整理的常见病句及修改:   1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level。   改进:Artists' work ...

托福写作中常见病句修改。托福写作中经常出现病句,根据中国考生的习惯本篇文章为大家整理的常见病句及修改:

  1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level。

  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization。

  2. For example, you work in a big factory。

  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory。

  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job。

  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career。

  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck。

  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck。

  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level。

  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life。

  6. Their brain is still very young。

  改进: They are still immature。

  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things。

  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better。

  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong。

  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong。

  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time。

  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time。

  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life。

  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it。

  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development。

  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development。

  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money。

  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money。

  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life。

  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one。

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