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7.13雅思写作名师解读

2013-07-17

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摘要:2013年7月13日的雅思考试刚刚结束,环球教育慎博老师特意在第一时间为雅思考生们整理了2013年7月13日雅思写作考试回忆及大作文范文,希望对雅思考生们有所帮助。

2013年7月13日的雅思考试刚刚结束,环球教育慎博老师特意在第一时间为雅思考生们整理了2013年7月13日雅思写作考试回忆及大作文范文,希望对雅思考生们有所帮助。更多雅思机经、雅思试题、雅思复习计划、雅思培训以及雅思口语考试技巧等相关信息请持续关注环球教育考试频道>>

  A类小作文:

  小作文:Table,the percentage of first year students ranking their courses: maths, computing, business. 小作文表格,一份大学生调查表结果,对教学质量等满意度

  A类大作文题目:

  The tendency to copy is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumers' goods.

  衣服的流行以及其他消费品的普及体现的是复制的趋势。

  To what extend do you agree or disagree.

  题目分析 :

  关键词: 1) the tendency to copy

  2)Popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer’s goods

  思路 一波三折写法

  理由一: the symbol of mixture of different culture , economic integration

  理由二:a form of self-expression , the presentation of personality ,mood and aesthetic appreciation

  让步段 (理由):

  1)plenty of manufactures to make more profits

  2)certain groups without analyzing to purchase and imitate blindly.

  转折 :

  1)limited temporary profits instead of the long-term and plentiful economic benefits .

  2) consumers to be more sensible levels to make the determined attempt to purchase

  结论: the irreversible tendency instead of imitating phenomenon

  首段:转述题目+表明立场
  开头一段写四句话,即背景+转述主题+自己观点+(引起下文)

  In current society especially in recent years, purchasing and chasing fashionable clothes and other consumer’s products emerging dramatically turns out to be common phenomenon of society. Some people deem it is the result of mutual imitating, however, as far as I am concerned that it is the inevitable tenor of globalization and economic integration and the Internet popularizing.

  第二段 : 不认同 ,理由一

  理由段,理由段是文章的主体部分由两种写法: ①段落中心句+支持句 ②段落中心句+支持句+例子
  该段主要陈述自己支持的某种观点或好处,可以只有一个理由

  To begin with, purchasing the popularity of fashionable clothes and other consumer’s products is the symbol of mixture of different culture, economic integration and advanced technology, to give rise to the lifestyle changing, which can be well explained by the following example. Taking the eminent Mobile Phone Apple for example, it is widely accepted and applied by increasing prevalent number of people around the world especially for Chinese, due to its extraordinary function and humanized style of designing.

  第三段 理由段,不认同理由二

  In addition, chasing the popularity of fashion clothing and other consumption goods is also a form of self-expression, the presentation of personality and aesthetic appreciation. Namely, a sizeable percentage of individuals tend to have more sense of identity toward the main fashionable tendency, which can be attributed to the powerful and potential influence of media and advertisement as well as the certain group who are living around.

  第四段 让步段
  该段由让步句+转折句构成。让步句承认某种观点的合理性,转折句对该观点加以反驳。

  There is no denying that plenty of manufactures imitate other eminent band to make more profits, and the certain groups without analyzing and distinguishing purchase blindly. However, in terms of manufactures, imitating can merely obtain limited temporary profits instead of the long-term and plentiful economic benefits. In terms of consumers, they will return to be more sensible levels to make the determined attempt to purchase more suitable and fashionable clothes and reasonable consumption goods according their financial situation.

  结论 总结全文+强调立场
  该段先总结全文,然后进一步强调自己观点,或得出结论

  On balance, taking into account the above perspectives, I am convinced that the popularity of fashion is the irreversible tendency brought about by advanced communication, soaring technology and the progress of economic and cultural integration instead of the so-called “tendency of copy”.

  以上内容就是环球教育慎博老师特意在第一时间为雅思考生们整理的2013年7月13日雅思写作考试回忆及大作文范文,希望对雅思考生们有所帮助。本文为环球教育慎博老师亲自撰写,如有转载,请务必标明出处。

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