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题目

A/D: people should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work.

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开头段：

If thinking about work in leisure time, it would be a hidden pressure. Such criterion to value relaxation related to the work people ordinary do as a nuisance. But it fails to take into account the veritable relationship between the interests and work. So as for I, I am in favor that sometimes relax relevant with work is a good choice.

主体段1：

To begin with, to be relaxed has nothing to do with the hobbies or physical activities whether they are distinguished from people's work. Different people have their different way to relax. Base on National Bureau of Statistics, researches have demonstrated that about half of people would like to do the similar things with their work. No matter out of what kind of reasons like the hobbies or habits, you cannot deny they don't have relaxed. Moreover, in our common sense, many people choose their job just for the sake of interests, which means they have powerful enthusiasm and energy. If they have more free time, they just want to concentrate on what they like, and they feel very comfortable instead of tired. Take the example of Mozart, a dominant musician. His ordinary work is performing his music, but you cannot say that in his spare time he does not touch the music at all. The thing goes the other way around. Mozart does often listen and play music to relax. In this case, emphasis on prohibitively the separation in rest and work is not appropriate.

主体段2：

In addition, spend time to relax with hobbies or physical activities alike with work that merits us a lot. Since occupied with heavy work, there is little time for us to think why and how, just to finish it as soon as possible. Along with comprehending the work unclearly, although you have done a great deal of jobs, it is hard for you to get advanced. But after you think over and work out the problem, you will feel proud and exciting. As architects, it is very busy for them because there is a lot of drawing to be accomplished. During work time, a wonderful project may not be thought out. But even in leisure time, a creative idea just comes out in mind. There are so many successful architectures come from this way. Thus being rest related to work can be such a valuable quality as an efficient and effective supplement to ordinary work.

主体段3：

Admittedly, to some extent, entire relaxation is an indispensable part of life. Some people really do not like mixing the rest with work, which is easy to be accepted and understood. Maybe the singers don't sing a song in spare time; the painters don't draw anything at all in spare time; the athletes don't move a step in spare time. However, this does not guarantee it to be separation from work. In fact, it is not realistic for people to totally run away from the work in most relax time.

结尾：重申观点

Broadly speaking, although pure relaxation provides us no pressure, its positive aspects are trivial compared with the unreliable realization that drives people far away from their most suitable way to have a rest. In final analysis, it is not responsible to say people should spend time relax far away from work.